Sunday, September 30, 2007

Observation for Sept. 25

Today I felt like I really gained a good amount of help on my community-based essay. I enjoyed the peer revision in that it helped me gain the insight from others that I would not have previously attained by working solely on my own. Also, it helped me get mulitiple perspectives on the issue. All in all I feel as if today was very helpful in the writing of our next assignment.

1 comment:

I.V. said...

Ok job so far. Try discussing what you're learning a little more in depth. Relate your initial ideas to those caveats you are learning in class.